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where do i need to improve


Again and again





I thought I could never see


I thought we would always be


The passion we could have


I wanna put it all in the past


You put my life on hold


And no matter what I was told


To you I would always come back


I kept falling for you again and again


You were the only one


Endless nights I spent thinking of you


And so many times I didn鈥檛 know what to do


I couldn鈥檛 have you but I wanted you


I longed for you, I needed you


But you were so far from reach


Outta my league above my level


And now months later, outta my life


So I don鈥檛 keep falling for you again and again


There鈥檚 always a spot in my heart


Reserved for you


No matter how far our lives drag us apart


You are not for me I'm not for you


I thought we were the same but now


I see that鈥檚 not true


I fell for you hard


You have no idea


What you meant to me


I feel like a fool


You were my priority


I was your option


I can鈥檛 believe I fell for you again and again


The games you playNew to this advice on my poem?
do the smart thing a write more and see if you could enter it in a contest ur poem made me cry and not much makes me cryNew to this advice on my poem?
Sounds like the typical high school heart broken poem done over so many times before.





Keep this poem though for when time goes on and you have forgotten all about this boy, and serious life experience has really built up. Go back and reread this and others you wrote in this fashion and see just how emotional and sad they really are.
omg!! i am crying right now for how sweet that was. i wish my boyfriend would be like that please give the world a favor and write more poems.