Starting a new business: Any advice on the ad I have so far?

The ad I have so far (to go in the yellow pages) is as follows:





Pet Services: We do it all!


Pet Sitting, Dog walking/running


(with water available, toys/playtime,


%26amp; a brushing afterward),


Pet Waste Management鈥?and more!


Quality you can trust, and we鈥檒l


beat any competitor鈥檚 prices.


Call ***-***-****





And there is a cute little puppy cartoon to go beside it, but for some reason it wouldn't post here.





What do you think? I think it sounds too wordy, but is there anyway I could cut down on the wording and still get the point across?





Any other advice? Thank you so much!!!!Starting a new business: Any advice on the ad I have so far?
Pretty good -- I agree with you, though, that it seems too wordy. Perhaps you could condense it to something like:





We do it all. Will beat any competitor's prices. Quality you can trust.


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