Starting a new business: Any advice on the ad I have so far?

The ad I have so far (to go in the yellow pages) is as follows:





Pet Services: We do it all!


Pet Sitting, Dog walking/running


(with water available, toys/playtime,


%26amp; a brushing afterward),


Pet Waste Management鈥?and more!


Quality you can trust, and we鈥檒l


beat any competitor鈥檚 prices.


Call ***-***-****





And there is a cute little puppy cartoon to go beside it, but for some reason it wouldn't post here.





What do you think? I think it sounds too wordy, but is there anyway I could cut down on the wording and still get the point across?





Any other advice? Thank you so much!!!!Starting a new business: Any advice on the ad I have so far?
Target busy women.


You must change the ad.


Name the price so that it can be justified instantly. To sell someone fast you have to just provide all info and why they should buy.





TRUST US WITH YOUR PET.


Make your choice easy. WE OVER CARE for you. Walking, brushing,


clean up, Puppy sitting, entertainment, your home, my home, $20 Per day $100 per week $5 per walk. The pet spa. Tips are free.. a love extension is a guarantee. Call to reserve a space and a free picture of you with your pet.





Boom you got them. All their worries dissipate. Why is answered.


You seem in demand and professional. Then the free pic is sweet and different. Love extension is the everlasting hook. Once they see this they will choose you regardless of price. Make the price only just fair. Not the lowest. That looks cheap and desperate. Learn some tips and get a instant camera. You are ready. Do not use Yellow Pages. Use internet yellow pages if at all. Craigslist and the media and local paper.


You will fall over dead when you see the price of the Yellow Book.Starting a new business: Any advice on the ad I have so far?
How about this:





';Pet Services: We do it all!


Pet-sitting, Dog walking/running


(provide water, toys/playtime,


brushing),


Pet Waste Management鈥?and more!


Best Quality, Best Price.


Call ***-***-****';





All the best to your business!